Ian Robyn here's some effort on the prototype:
https://xd.adobe.com/view/e00d3155-c6b0-4440-aa4b-b5d5591d82f9-b55e/grid :)

Laura thanks - what changes did you make? 

I am not sure what's been removed from the services pages to make them less heavy, don't remember all the details so its hard to comment on this

Will you be giving Winston options for visuals as a next step - I can see you applied the colour change but not sure about the rest so want to make sure we have a plan for this 

Please let me know and we can record your thinking for him as a next step to get more feedback 

Hey Robyn , sorry to keep you waiting was getting some food in :)
Here is a screenshot of the SMS page before revising the content.

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Re visuals. There are three options on the final slide on the Xd link 🤗 Let me know if I misunderstood.

If that's good, I'll do a quick video and send that off 🙌 – Let me know what you think – Thanks!

awesome, thanks Laura once you hear from Ian we can record a quick overview and speak about the prototype and changes you made - I think it works but suspect Winston might want to remove more from the services pages - I know he referenced the faq's and dashboards feeling like too much in combo with all the other stuff - our intent is to make sure the pages have all the information on it so  if I was to remove more, it would be the people with the phone screenshots - (screenshot below) visually nice but not critical for the page in terms of information - I'd rather remove that than the faq's or dashboards 

Lastly thanks for pointing out the visuals, I didn't look at the whole file - I love the options and think they are on point - Winston needs to weigh in on what he likes.  I think option number 1 works best for me followed by number 2 :)

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Fab!! thanks Robyn 😊 Totally agree on the design options, 1 then 2
And we can defos remove the section you screenshotted. I'll hang tight for Ian  input

Laura this is already a vast improvement. 

I think there is still quite a lot going on. I can't remember what we discussed about a template for these service pages, but something along the lines of: 

I'm also wondering whether we should drop some of the CTAs on the page, and possibly also remove the section on dashboard, API and web interface. 

Thanks Ian - I hadn't previously added a section about "who it's for". Before I go further – please have a look at the SMS page (below) and let me know if that's better. (I added the sections on the left) I've removed the mockups and one CTA. my thought is that the CTA at the bottom should rather be "Contact us" vs "Download the pdf". Have also removed the dashboard things.

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Laura  thanks! Let's do a quick walkthrough after standup.